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Thursday, 18 May 2017

My one Paragraph

The blue Beach.

The blue beach As I walked on the rocky beach I can see the rough children playing on the smooth sand while getting a scoop of tiny sand bits on their face. As I walked towards my sister I see her turn her head and there it was the wavy blue beach crushing onto the black rocks making them fall of their shells. As I walk along I find a deep deep hole with tiny crabs buried you can hardly see their body.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jade its me Ruby next door room 7,
    i just want to say i'm learning paragraphs to I like your paragraph there probably better than mine. Good Job :)

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